Miss Thrasher's notes on film showcase

Positive


Ethereal effect
Don't see Efosa's face till end
Mise-en-scene well thought out


Negative

too much effect in some areas
Jade's foot stomp needs reworking or cutting
credits need to re-done
dialogue
too much boring walking


I took these on board and made a lot of cuts and edits that make the film look a lot more professorial and has a cleaner look overall.

Film Showcase Feedback

The last question from the feedback sheet."Did you notice any serious issues such as continuity errors, strange edits - Did anything not make sense to you?"

• "Storyline was a tad confusing but knew roughly what was going on. Maybe sharpen some of the shots a bit."
• "Sound needs a bit of work. Didn't get the bit with the train."
• "Some bits are too dark, can't see as well."
• "Camera shots are slightly jumpy."

We read these over and took everything they said into consideration

Feedback from Showcase Part 2



"Who do you think the target audience is?"

• "16+"
• "Mainstream"
• "People who like horror"
• "15+"

The above comments show that to an extent we have succeeded in staying relevant to the genre. Even though we hadn't finished editing our film, people could already see how it's of the horror genre

Film Showcase

The class held a showcase lesson where each group showed off what they've done so far. We handed out sheet for our classmates to fill out which helped us find out what we needed to finish. 
The first question we asked was "What was especially good about the film?"

• "Really good editing- Red lipstick with black and white shot and good camera work and use of sound."
• "The camera work was really good. Good use of colour. Lighting was very good."
• "Never see the face till the end. Good shots of the knife. Shots of make-up and nail varnish at the start were really good."
• Lighting suits the genre. Good acting