Positive
Ethereal effect
Don't see Efosa's face till end
Mise-en-scene well thought out
Negative
too much effect in some areas
Jade's foot stomp needs reworking or cutting
credits need to re-done
dialogue
too much boring walking
I took these on board and made a lot of cuts and edits that make the film look a lot more professorial and has a cleaner look overall.
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